FREE 10-Video Series Reveals Exactly How to Unlock the Secrets to Crafting Compelling Sales Copy


I offer personal insights and experience into copywriting to help beginners create, use and profit from their sales copy.


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The Nature of the Offer — Focusing on Advantages

A lot of businesses that sell a product (or service) mistake its "features" for "advantages" (the nature of the product) again and again. How come? Because they design features into the product. They don't, nevertheless, experience the advantages... Buyers do.

And the buyers want the advantages, not the features. So you have to deliver advantages, not features. Don't mix up the two on your sales page or presentation about the nature of your product.

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What Can You Offer?

Your product intent is your product's most potent advantage, combined with a substantial, unique aspect of your business. It answers that hardest question. Why should likely buyers purchase your product, from your company?

Here's how to develop this...

What is it that you are selling? Put down what your product is and does.

You ought to know and comprehend each feature and benefit the product might have. Writing styles ought to always vary depending upon the desired audience. You ought to research who uses and buys the product to establish the tone and style of your audience and produce a unique voice for your product.

What is the advantage to your buyer? What trouble does it cure, or what gain does it supply?

It's frequently not adequate to simply list the features of a product as your audience might not always comprehend them. Utilize descriptive language to communicate how any one characteristic will benefit the customer and how buying the item will make their life simpler. Potential customers wish to know what the product will do for them.

What is unique about your product? About you? What makes you stick out from the competition?

Continue working on this till you are able to distinctly separate yourself from the field. There has to be a convincing reason for doing business with you, rather than your competitor. It’s crucial when composing product descriptions to be concise. Utilize common language and words that are simple to understand.

Clearly describe the product without becoming too technical or hohum so the reader remains engaged. Summarize the above into one tight, mighty; motivating phrase that you can use again and again that will persuade your buyer to do business with you, to trade their cash for the advantages delivered by your product.

The best product descriptions always invite a sale. Be originative and encourage the likely purchaser to buy your product by telling them precisely how to do it.

As you begin to work through the above steps, you might discover this to be a lot more difficult than it appears. Don't quit!

You must show the nature of the product. If it was simple, everybody would be making a fortune! Muster up a tight, sharp product intention that sells your likely buyer.

There's a 2nd advantage to this exercise. It will clear up your own vision of this monetization process! Write your product intention down. Keep it unwaveringly fixed in your mind.

Match your product intention to your ideal buyer’s most potent motivator, either "hurting" or "something to gain".

Hurting — individuals feel deprived, nearly all in either wealthiness, wellness, love, or happiness. Show individuals how you assist in the area that they're disadvantaged in. Make it clear that you empathize with your visitor's trouble and that you have the remedy for her hurting or fear of loss.

Something to gain — emphasize the single most crucial favorable advantage that you offer to your buyer, in language that she will value.

If your product intention answers the "What's in it for me?" inquiry, you're midway to the sale.

Understanding What Your Customer Wants

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By selling what individuals truly want it converts to prompt sales for your business and in addition to that, long-term recurrent sales in the time to come for your business. You likewise establish awesome customer relationships as you frequently make them feel that you truly ‘listen’ to what they want and go the additional mile in supplying it to them. You're harmonized with their world and make them sense you are a reliable resource or means of assisting them to accomplish their goals and realize their ambitions.

Economically wise, being the “true supplier” to your buyers allows you to distinguish yourself from the masses of businesses who simply “get by” in the market (out of blind chance) and provides you an edge to require higher prices in the market as you understand that your services or products are constantly sought after.

You simply have to learn how to have an actual interest in and concern for others – which won’t truly be hard for you as it’s likewise part of the human psychology. Don’t agree with me? Answer this: Don’t you like it when somebody asks for your assistance? When you recognize a relative or acquaintance needs something, don’t you try to seek resolutions for them? See what I mean? 

Treating every individual you meet in the market whether it's on the net or person to person as a friend or relative you're helping out, removes the need for you to put up a ‘front’ simply to sell something. You'll make certain what you’re providing will really assist the other individual – or at the very least make sure to offer them the very best that you have to provide.

In the same way, if you know that the product or service you're offering what truly works well or would be truly beneficial to other people, why not begin by providing it to family and acquaintances instead? It’s not as though you’re pushing the product or service on them as you have no one else to provide it to but because you truly believe that their interests are best served by purchasing it.

These are the questions most individuals are attempting to find an answer in order for them to arrive at the definite decision. And if we truly wish to understand the answer to this question, our only choice is to do a little research.

There are all sorts of twists along the route that might lead you to believe you have a high demand theme. We must be able to comprehend and satisfy the need, wishes and expectations of our buyers on a particular product that they’re attempting to buy. These 3 are called the common needs or minimal requirements for a purchase.

Needs are the common reasons or the minimal requirements consumers are seeking in a product or service. They're called the qualifying dimensions in a buy.

Wants are the influencing attributes among a lot of choices. Expectations, on the other hand, are values or intangibles affiliated with a product or service. Expectations are in reality part of wants but they get to be exceedingly crucial

when products or services are not specialized.

For instance, in studying a logic book, college students seek the following: Relevant logic constructs and use of simple language, simple to comprehend and affordable prices. These like ideas may be applied to net marketing also. After all, the Net is just a different place to sell products. The general construct of demand is the same there as it is anyplace else.

Now, the second matter that has to be considered is the level of competition. Level of competition implies the ratio of your brand sales versus the overall market sales.

While companies would by nature specify its target rivals, it's in reality the consumers who in the end decide the competitive frame. We have to consequently pick out the market segment where we may have a likely leadership or at least a firm challenger role. Because the overruling aim of getting into this business isn't simply to satisfy the needs and wants of our buyers but to do so productively better than his rivalry. Otherwise, our rivalry will wind up satisfying the buyers better than us.

The third component to be considered is determining the basic interest level about the product. Basic interest in a product helps us to judge where our demand and rival numbers fall into the big picture. Merely saying, if there isn’t a great deal of demand for the product, and there isn’t much rivalry, it would appear that it may not be so great. However the research doesn’t stop here; there's one final matter to be considered. We have to also learn how other people are advertising those products. If there are a great number of them doing so, it might imply that it’s a great product type to get into. Coming to the final stage of the process is studying and evaluating all the data that has been collected. We have to look at all of the information we have accumulated on demand, rivalry, and advertisement, and make decision as how they all balance out.

And here are many factors that have to be assessed: (a) not adequate demand implies not enough individuals are going to purchase (b) too much rivalry implies not enough revenue (c) a bit much advertising drives up the price of PPC ads, and rivalry also (d) not enough basic interest, blended with low demand, implies there might not be a great market even if there's rivalry attempting to make the sales.

How do you subtly hypnotize your prospects?

Even though the Net is an exceedingly interactional medium, it’s still the terms on your web page that will make or break you.

I’m going to share a couple of hints on how to turn your web page into a persuasive sales machine. We’ll consider a couple of illustrations, and, utilizing the tips I outline here, we'll likewise come up with a list of guideposts that you are able to utilize to arrange your own hypnotizing copy to sell, sell, sell!

Grab and Keep Their Attention

The Main Question – What’s In It For Me?

Your potential customer doesn’t care about you. They don’t have concern that you’ve spent $20,000 establishing the latest release of your gizmo. They don’t have concern that you have a decent company logo and a neatly configured site. Nope. When anybody visits your site they have one question in mind:

“What’s in it for me?”

The unrivaled purpose of your web page is to sell. And to build sales, you have to answer this query for each and every potential customer that comes to your site. The better way to answer the “What’s in it for me?” Query is by relating to your likely buyers through the advantages of your product.

Characteristics Versus Advantages

If your wish your web page to be an ongoing sales machine it’s utterly critical that you are able to translate your products list of characteristics into advantages. Advantages sell because they appeal to individuals emotions.

Characteristics don't. For instance, view this characteristic list for one particular product:

  • Keyword rich URL’s
  • Integral contact form
  • Simply add Google AdSense ads

Pretty boring, eh? Now let’s translate this list of characteristics into advantages:

Keyword rich URL’s: better your search engine placing by including the title of your material in its web page link. It’s a long-familiar fact that all of the huge search engines prefer sites with keyword-rich links.

Integral contact form: Make it simple for your site visitors to get hold of you utilizing the integral contact form. No more messy “do it yourself” HTML forms!

Simply add Google AdSense ads: turn a profit from your knowledge and authoring skills by placing Google AdSense ads beside your material. This product makes it easy to put in AdSense code wherever you decide.

As you are able to see, I’ve added the chief advantage of every point. I’m sure you’ll concur that the advantages list makes the product sound much more appealing than the ho-hum characteristic list.

Social Substantiation

Next time you are somewhere, try this out:

Walk up to a corner where there are a set of stoplights. Once there’s no traffic (make certain you double check), walk across the street before the walk light turns green. If there are others waiting with you, 9 times out of 10 they'll likewise begin walking. This is an illustration of social substantiation.

Here’s a different illustration:

In the beginning part of a week discover a comparatively quiet restaurant and have lunch there. Rather than sitting inside, sit at one of their outside tables. Over the run of your meal I assure you at least five individuals will come into the restaurant and order their lunch on what would’ve commonly been a quiet day for that certain restaurant.

These are simply two illustrations of social substantiation that I've discovered. Social substantiation relies on the concept of “if he’s doing it, then it has to be good, so I ought to do it also”.

The best way to implement social proof on your web site is via customer testimonials or referrals. By showing your visitors that people have already purchased and are using your products or services, you eliminate most of the pre-conceived doubt and skepticism they carry about you and your company, and believe me; everyone has doubts, even for the best of companies.


The matter of authoring a great headline may fill a book in itself. There's no correct or incorrect way to compose a headline, and you ought to always test assorted versions of your headline because if you have a feeble headline very few individuals will carry on reading, therefore resulting in lost sales.

The most beneficial way to come up with a headline is to place yourself in your potential customer’s shoes. Ask yourself “If I were among my potential buyers, what terms, characteristics, advantages, etc would make me wish to continue reading and finally order my product?”

I’ll give you a couple of tips to get you started out authoring or revising your own headline:

Social substantiation headlines work well. Utilize phrases like “Who else wishes to [have whatever your product does]”, “Learn how 1000s of individuals have [accomplished whatever your product executes]”, “Here’s how to [acquire the advantages your product supplies]”, and so forth.

Your headline ought to stress the top advantage of your product. It ought to be short and pertinent and ought to make people want to continue reading to learn more.

Keep away from headlines that sound too great to be true or include a bit much hype, like “With only an hour a day you too may become a millionaire in a month”.

Explore. Look around the Net for headlines that snap up your attention and copy their formatting, or remember recent purchases you’ve made on the net and mark down the headline or web material that swayed you to purchase and utilize it on your own page.

Formalness not Demanded

Any great business owner ought to think of his buyers as extension of him and his company. Structure your sentences as if you're talking to a close friend. I find that formalness in web copy, e-mail or phone conversations only bestows clumsiness, so I attempt to avoid it.

Certainly, if you’re an enterprise-level company formalness is a must, but most individuals purchase from small companies because they favor personal interactions and value the attention to detail.

Here’s an illustration of what I like to address as “starchy” copywriting:

The new version of XYZ is ideal for e-mail marketers. It includes dozens of fresh characteristics perfect for anybody looking to begin and maintain an e-mail marketing campaign.

Flat, ho-hum, no advantages, and it doesn’t speak to the potential customer.

Always attempt and utilize the word “you” as much as you are able to, while refraining from utilizing your company name or references to your establishment as much as conceivable.

Here’s a partial making over of the starchy copywriting:

Are you searching for an e-mail marketing answer that will step-up your income, put you ten steps before of your closest rival *and* make your customers adore you? If so, XYZ is for you. We know small businesses like yours and have assembled an affordable e-mail marketing answer…

This is simply an easy illustration, but I’m sure you are able to see what I’m getting at.

Remember, they don’t have concern about you or your company. They only have concern about what’s in it for them.


It’s not easy to study paragraphs of text on a screen. You have to break up your copy as much as you are able to. Among the best ways to catch the attention of individuals who merely scan over your web page is with bullet points.

Think about this paragraph:

XYZ makes it simple to manage a whole site from one location. You are able to update your web page at any time utilizing only a PC. You’ll likewise save time and cash and be up and running in less than 60 minutes!

Now let’s reformat it with bullets:

XYZ makes it simple to…

  • Handle an whole site from just one location
  • Create updates at any time, from any Net -enabled PC
  • Save time and cash and be up and running in under 60 minutes

As you are able to see, it’s much simpler to read a list of bullet points than a paragraph of textual matter. Did you also observe the ellipses (the three dots) that I put in after the opening sentence?:

XYZ makes it simple to…

This is a different copywriting trick you are able to and ought to utilize. It states to the reader, “Hello! Continue reading, there’s more info below”. As a guideline you ought to utilize it to lead from headlines into your intro paragraph, as well as every 3-5 paragraphs, simply to keep the reader centered.

Avoiding the Pitfalls

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Prior to us wrapping up, here’s a list of matters to avoid when copywriting for your web page or product:

What Not To Do 

Massively big typefaces. Do not make your headline gigantic simply because you saw it on a different web page. It’s admittedly true that a killer headline will make or break you, however when you are able to read the headline from the other side of the room it’s a bit much.

Keep away from text background colors. I’m certain you’ve seen text like this all over the net. Although you might think its attention catching, it’s truly simply annoying and there’s no proof it really works.

Don’t underscore for accent. Underscores are set aside for links and links only. Don't underscore a point like this. It’s atrocious and confusing for visitors to your web page.

Be a man or woman of your word. If you assure a 30-day return policy, do it. Why not place testimonials from buyers who have had returns on your page to prove to your visitors that you'll politely honor all return requests?

From a site user’s viewpoint, I’d like to tell you about a couple of my least-favorite things in sites (and I know I’m not solo here): 

  • Home pages that don’t tell me rapidly what the product is/does
  • Obscure/ambiguous/non-meaningful/non-intuitive icon names
  • Puzzling navigation
  • Not being able to come by what I want rapidly
  • Braggart PR fluff (for example., “We’re proud of our commitment to customer service”)
  • Pages that don’t bear “Home” and “Contact Us” buttons
  • Pages that discuss some undefined, unstructured, anonymous group of buyers out there, but aren’t directed at me
  • Needing to scroll lots
  • Lengthy, dull blocks of text
  • Disquieting, moving pictures
  • Flavorless stock photos of groups of crazy busy, smiling, multi-cultural executives
  • Links that aren’t distinctly, obvious links ​
  • Illegible text (for example., text that’s too little, or colorful text on a colorful background, or text with a perplexing jumble of different fonts)
  • Pages that don’t tell me how to reach an actual individual
  • “Contact Us” pages that provide only a form to send off a message but don’t tell me the company’s e-mail address, street address or phone number
  • Registration forms that call for a postcode
  • Error messages that put the blame on me (for example., “Bad Request”)

Inquiry into this subject suggests that site users: 

  • Travel to a site with a particular undertaking in mind, and leave rapidly if they can’t discover what they want.
  • Glance over pages and headlines instead of reading each word.
  • Wish to feel that they’re doing something dynamic (for example, clicking) instead of just passively reading.
  • Shift rapidly from page to page, pulling out only the most crucial info on every page.
  • Wish to feel involved.
  • Have a poorer attention span than when reading hard-copy text.
  • Have confined tolerance for scrolling up and down, and detest scrolling left and right.
  • Don’t inevitably enter your site via your home page.
  • Travel around your site in ways you didn’t anticipate and can’t control. 

Remember... Before you compose a single word, you have to be clear about the purpose of your page. Who's it directed at? What are their perceptions / motives / aspirations / goals / needs? What do you wish individuals to accomplish and experience when they visit your page? What is the picture and personality that you wish your brand to project? What are the most crucial jobs that visitors come to your page to achieve (that signifies crucial to them, not you)? What info do they require/need? 

Wrapping Up 

Want to understand how to promote intuitively? Simple. Become your buyer. What would make you feel great about buying your product or service? All right, that's your beginning place.

When you turn into your target market, you're on the correct path. See your product or service from their eyeballs and formulate your campaign to fit their needs. ​

  • Once you market, provide your audience the message that they wish to hear.
  • Produce content that makes your target audience feel great, not only about the product or service, but about deciding to purchase it.
  • Keep your marketing in line with your moral values.
  • Listen more to your gut feeling and less to outside marketing-guru content.
  • Center on what makes individuals feel great about your product or service? 

If you're marketing a beauty product, you help individual’s look and feel better, if you're a lawyer, you assist your clients through hard situations, and you resolve troubles. Keep with that 14 mentality, whatever your business is. The most beneficial marketing is feel-good marketing provided through effective storytelling.

PR all comes down to telling a commanding story that engages the readers, spectators or listeners and causes them to assume action. And so, begin thinking about your marketing, advertising and PR in this way. Realize that your job is to exhibit your product or service by telling a commanding story with a call to action.

Back away and see your business from this view. Begin to make a list of your most commanding stories. You're seeking success stories.

How do you assist your customers or buyers, how do you affect their lives? Do you make their lives simpler, more gratifying? Remember, you're not selling your product or service; you're selling an experience, an emotion. 

You have to let your buyers know why they have to purchase from you. If you don't tell them, they won't understand and the most beneficial way to tell them is with your winner stories.

If you have a really narrow or particular target audience, say adult female over 40, then come up with winner stories that demonstrate how you meet their requirements.

If your target market is less specific, say it's a nutritional supplement that may be utilized by individuals of all ages, then dissect your target market into sections and come up with particular stories and messages that are contrived specifically to meet the requirements of those markets.

Once arranging your marketing plan, drill down and drill deep. You wish to make your buyers feel great about their decision. You wish them to feel they've not only made the correct conclusion, they've made a bright conclusion.

Remember, every individual who sees your PR, ad or marketing campaign has to feel that you're talking to him or her specifically.

You need your buyers or clients to feel that you configured your product specifically to meet their certain needs. So, have a look at your present promotional campaign. Now turn into your buyer. What would make you feel great about making the buy?

About Author: Andrea Fiore
I’m a single mom with two young children, living in Los Angeles. I’ve been in various fields of copywriting for over a decade. And I have to say — I love it. I’ve gone from writing copy for restaurants in New York City, to writing online copy for a number of ecommerce sites selling nationally, to doing SEO copywriting for professional and product-selling sites. I’ve worked with many affiliate marketers on website copy and email copy. I’ve done ad copy for national or local magazine ad campaigns. Over the years I’ve developed more and more skills and more resources. Every copywriting project is challenge in psychology and artful communication that is persuasive. I like these challenges.
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